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I don’t know how I write the sad feel
what is my mistek
I have heart feeling Love
but what I can do to not bled
The love good dream nice feel
but noone can sure the ather feel love
or belive that feeling
I want cray,forget, and flyway
I want hide away of people
I feel I will die
yes, I will my heart bleed slowly
everyday lose more atherbut noone can sure the ather feel love
want cray,forget, and flywayقولتى فى الاول مش بتعرفى تكتبى الاحساس الحزين كتبتى ليه
بصى كده للجملتين اللى عندى دول وقليلى ايه رايك فيهم فين الغلط؟؟؟؟؟؟
اخوكى الفاتح
ohh before i forgot thank you
may allah help youI wish that you could feel
My arms about you tight,
Holding you up close
All thru out the night.
To know that I am there
And never away far,
That I will remain
Where ever that you are.
That you could press back
Into my warm embrace,
And feel my soft touch
Warm against your face.
Or you could shift your hips
And press against me tight,
To feel my body’s heat
And my lips kissing you light.
I wish that you could hear
My softly whispered song,
To lull you into sleep
For it’s here that we belong.
That you could hear me say
All you need to hear,
As I tell you of my love
Whispered soft against your ear.
And you could feel my breath
Warm against your skin,
As I let my presence beg you
To let this true love in.
I wish that I could hold you
And whisper long into your night,
Never would you wonder then
As I held you to me tight…
Best Regards
لكن اختى الفا ضله هذا المجلس يهتم بتنميه اللغه الانجليزيه لدى الاعضاء ولا نستطيع اغفال تلك الاخطاء الاملائيه التى وقعتى بها
مثلا :cray وather feel love اولا خطأ ثانيا لن يستقيم معنى الجمله
noone تكتب هكذا no onemy dear sister that section of majalisna is concerns with english langauage and how to grow with our langauge very well so i can not ignore that mistakes in your poem as for example:
you write cray it sould be written cry
also ather feel love itthank you dear please take care with spell
mohammed do not be strong with the girle because maybe she is traying to improve her langauage
that’s all aboutملكه الحب انتى ايضا عليكى تقويه الانجليزى لقد اخطاتى فى كلمتين
ويشهد الله انى لا اتصيد الا خطاء لاحد لان من تتبع عورات الناس تتبع الله عوراته
اختى الكلمتين هما girle و traying
كلمه تحاول من غير حرف a لانها الان معناها طبق طعاموكلمه بنت من غير حرف e
اختى الفاضله من اردت احراجها يعلم الله انى لم ارد ذلك لانى لاحظت ان القصيده فيها معانى جميله ولكن الاخطاءا لاملائيه هى التى منعتنا من الاستمتاع بها
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