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  • #15933
    Maryooma
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    “” Inside that room “”

    Inside that room, I saw a little girl…..
    sitting alone, trying to play….
    Singing a song, “lets together sail”.
    I wondered a lot, why she is away..
    From children and not with them at play.
    I said to myself, she is a little girl….
    Sitting alone trying to play.
    And when I closed, I was shocked…
    I was surprised…. i was confused….
    That little girl, in fact was me….
    Sitting alone, trying to play.

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    #403760
    المشاكس
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    really it is very nice words

    #403835
    Bint AL-hejaz
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    hmmm sis you decided to copy (Inside that room) and get
    every one to share it with you, which mean you liked it. may i asked you while you were reading this have you real seen your self in it ? if yes will you allow me to ask why?

    #403913
    Maryooma
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    FIRST THANK YOU SISTER FOR YOUR INTERESTING …..

    ACTUALLY THIS IS A PEICE THAT WAS WRITTEN BY A FRIEND AND WHEN I READ IT I REALLY LIKE IT AND DECIDED TO COPY IT HERE …….
    WELL, I REALLY SOMETIMES SEE MYSELF IN THIS POEM BECAUSE SOMETIMES I LIKE TO BE ALONE …NOT ONELY THAT BUT ALSO SOMETIMES I DONT FIND ANYONE NEAR TO ME IN A TIME I LIKE TO BE WITH A SOFT HEART LIKE MY MOTHER OR SISTER OR MY FRIENDS ……..

    maryooma

    #403914
    Maryooma
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    THANK YOU BROTHER …….

    IAM REALLY HAPPY BECAUSE THEREIS SOMEONE LIKE WHAT I HAVE COPIED AND MAYBE IN THE FUTURE I START TO WRITE POEMS …..

    THANK YOU AGAIN

    MARYOOMA

    #403954
    Bint AL-hejaz
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    I see what you mean sis and i hope when ever you get this
    feeling you find the people whom you love around

    #404054
    Maryooma
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    thank you sis for your worm feeling……

    it is your time to answer me if you don’t mind….

    what did u feel when you first read these words …..?
    have you seen yourself in it….?

    thank you ….

    MARYOOMA

    #404343
    Bint AL-hejaz
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    salamu alikom sister MARYOOMA
    well to be honest with you sis i didn’t see myself in that little girl but i felt sad to know there is someone feeling that way and even sader when i knew you feel the same thing as the writer. i wish i can do something or say things that can take this feeling away from you but i want you to know one thing which is life not worth a single sad moment it is just too short. just always remember allah whom he the only one will bring inerpeace
    thank you sister for sharing your feeling.

    lots of love

    bint al -hejaz

    #404403
    Maryooma
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    sallam aliekpm sis…

    i really would like to thank u sis for ue worm feelings ,,,,
    i really felt what you want to say …
    thank you and i always thank allah and i remember that allah is helping the person if that person depend on him and remember him always…..

    than you sis

    MARYOOMA

    #405675

    thanx for that poem its nice 🙂 but sis u have to know that when u decided to be alone u can decide to be around with people with ur family ,friends no one is born to be alone in this world why do we always like to put ourselves in that situation… is it a way for asking care ? lets start from this point ….what do u say ?:)

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